I liked to listen to this song. it was really nice harmonically and everyone wishes they could sing like you BUT since there's a slight chance you'll read this I have to ask: what's with the "tonight". It's such an overused word in songwriting that you really need a great reason for it to let it be part of your lyrics. And i myself don't see that, which of course doesn't mean it's not there. I might just need someone to explain it for me. And just so no one takes offense: I'm asking out of curiosity, a deep respect for the craft and a potential chance to learn something.
Either way, I'm looking forward to the next album from the only person who's able to do Jeff Buckley justice.